Lost in the crowd in the midst of nowhere,
She was just another girl finding her feet on the ground.
No expectations, no aspirations, no dreams and no hopes she harbored,
Save a bleak future behind the fog of fear and doubt.
He came like a tempest infuriating the dark waters,
Raising pandemonium that drowned her mere existence.
He lent a hand that she reluctantly accepted,
Tenderness in the brown depths of his mysterious eyes, in her heart, reflected.
This is not love, for sure, don’t hurry,
For love at first sight, is for the foolhardy.
But cupid’s spell had done the trick and her heart and mind were out of sync,
As in the eye of the fierce storm, lay hidden a mysterious merry soul.
He was passion, she was joy; he was fire, she was the flame,
Not fit as a puzzle but capable of love and a life game.
Slowly and steadily they did tread,
Each holding the other for life’s twists and turns ahead.
They cried, they laughed and sang in glee,
Sharing sunshine and storms merrily.
A decade and some more, it is time to say, they fit like a puzzle – anyway.
They stay drowned in the tides of love and respect for one another,
Until the Gods wish upon them a companionship that lasts forever and some more.
Very touching
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It is a delight to have you read and leave your feedback, Nidhin. Thank you very much!
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Very nice… keep up the good work.. waiting for more of such.. thank you for liking my poems too …
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Thank you, Nikesh! Poetry is one I tread on very carefully, so the feedback coming from a poet like you is inspiration enough. You have a very lovely blog and very beautiful poems.
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Thank you very much…. As soon as I get time, I will surely read your other blogs too…. you are a more than good writer, by the way☺☺☺
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Sure, Nikesh, please read and let me know what you think. Thank you very much, I am absolutely humbled. Have a super Sunday 🙂
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even if Cupid sometimes seem to have goofed up, true love eventually survives!
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Absolutely, Doctor!
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Walk merrily on the path of poetry dear Pranitha for this one was beautiful, as if a love story slowly unfolding before me. I loved it. Keep them coming 😍👍❤
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My dearest poet, this is one big compliment for me. Trust me when I say that you are definitely an inspiration that I have tried even stepping on the poetry front. Thank you, Radhika 🙂
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I am humbled dear 😇😊
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This unfolds beautifully…just like love itself!
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Thank you, Andrei! Glad that you enjoyed it!
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Yes, Pranitha! You’re welcome! 🙂
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🙂
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I’m so glad to read your poetry here; the story unfolds gently yet draws one in tightly, we are left wanting more!
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Thank you for your encouraging words, Kim! So glad you enjoyed it. That is a big compliment coming from you 🙂
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My pleasure…I enjoy reading your words and finding myself in your world!
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🙂
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Beautiful composition!
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Thank you so very much for reading, enjoying and leaving your feedback. Means a big deal to me 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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🙂
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Finally they realized it and fitted into a puzzle… Well written nitha
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Thank you, Akhi! Love is a magical potion that gets you high initially but keeping it up is the tough bit, but if you are successful in keeping it up then you both will fit like a puzzle anyway 🙂
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Wow…
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Thank you so very much CS!
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You write beautifully Pranitha😊 and that’s a touching story. I love how it unfolds. Thank you for stopping by my blog because now I get to experience your writing 😊
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So glad you liked it, Divya. Also, thank you for stopping by, reading and leaving your feedback!
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This was a very inspiring post 🙂 Lovely
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Thank you very much for reading, enjoying and leaving your feedback!
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I enjoy reading your posts 😊😄
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That is so very sweet of you!
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Inspirational, Pranitha and beautifully penned. The story makes one’s heart beat a little faster.
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Thank you, Nancy! Glad you liked it!
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Beautiful. Amazingly written and the beauty behind this kind of love is almost tangible. Loved it!! ❤
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Thank you for your sweet words, H!
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❤️❤️
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Thank you so very much!
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