There once was a red timepiece,
That clocked my childhood days,
The dainty golden needles,
Dancing about in circles at a leisurely unhurried pace.
That same red clock,
That one reliable of them all,
It’s still dainty needles have alarmingly picked up pace,
Running about in circles, as if in an endless race.
From the little timepieces to the Big Ben that stands tall,
From my favorite red clock to the intricate designer time piece on the wall,
These keepers of time are conspiring against human race,
For sane adults are seen hurrying about life at a frantic pace.
And when the screen entices the deprived mind and the frustrated soul,
Hypnotizing the eager spirit under its glowing spell,
The conspiring time keepers malevolently intervene,
Dissolving minutes into hours like a magician in a dispelling act.
While we spend our waking hours ruled by these time keepers, here are a few tips to outdo these conspirators,
Try easing those eyes off the enticing and exciting mirage of the virtual world and take a good look around,
The joys of real friendship, true love, innocence of a child and the sounds of nature are still to be found.
Lending a helping hand, enjoying a good laugh, a solitary walk under the stars still rejuvenates the deprived soul.
And what is more,
I have often noticed that these little acts of ‘real’ joy,
Force the dainty golden needles of my red clock that is locked in an eternal race,
To dance in circles at an unhurried leisurely pace.
Very well put across Pranitha. Most of us can relate to this one. Rings in so true with the present times. Loved it 👍
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Thank you so very much dear Radhika.
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if there’s one thing to be stopped ASAP, if possible, apart from the years speeding by are those two needles of the clock that turn around without a break, to meet each other, exchange a hug and a warm kiss! oh how I wished they stopped!
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I so wish too, Doctor. It is morning, noon and night in a blink of the eye. I wonder where the years have flown by.
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Enjoy your time leisurely, if possible 🙂
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I too hope too, Indira 🙂
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Thanks for the visit and a complement given 🙂
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I absolutely love how you have represented the busy world around us almost bringing the idea that we are chained to time. It has a really good message!!
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Thank you so very much, Ramya. It warms my heart that you resonate my thoughts too! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Sometimes I want those needles to go hurried and sometimes not ! Can you find one such clock for me ?!
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I will gift you one if I find one myself. Trust me, these days these clocks are just not right! 😉
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Beautiful. Yes, life seems interesting in simple things
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Absolutely, Ravi. Thank you very much.
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Such a wonderful composition Pranitha! Carries much weight in today’s world and you’ve put across this message so eloquently!
Might I add, you weave your words so beautifully😊
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Thank you my dear friend. Good to catch you here again. Hope all is good at your end. Glad you enjoyed that piece!
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Your message is so apt and beautifully woven. Indeed the needles moved slower in childhood times, now it takes taking eyes off of them and everything else, to feel the leisurely pace of existence devoid of time.
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Yes! Miss those time piece makers who made the clock for it to leisurely go about in rounds and not run about like a hamster on wheels. But on a more serious note, I suppose it is all up to us, to decide to take life at our own pace. Thank you, Pragalbha.
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I agree with your serous note. It has become the most powerful choice, to be able to choose our own pace. You are very welcome.
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Absolutely!
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I don’t think I have any new words to appreciate this poem. But have you read Mark Twain’s essay called ‘the Watch’? You’d enjoy reading it. Your post reminds me of it.
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